Stories that affect us don’t always have to be full length novels. Sometimes, they’re short stories, and today’s author shares how one in particular changed her life and helped shape her writing career. Welcome Sarah Brentyn!
Winning the Lottery
It won’t surprise most of you that the last book I read is not a book. It’s a short story.
I was introduced to “The Lottery” during a lit class for my undergrad degree.
It spoke to me.
It said something like, “Hey! You, there! College chick. Check me out. I’m short and spectacular. I mean, seriously, I’m awesome. Read me again!”
I did. And still am (obviously) many years later.
One dark and stormy (actually, it was clear and starry) night in January, I decided to revisit this favorite. I fell asleep thinking about it, woke up thinking about it.
I could not stop thinking about it.
Her writing…
She weaves different moods seamlessly throughout this piece. The setting in contrast to the plot is perfect. The dialogue is fantastic. The foreshadowing is just enough to keep you guessing. The characters’ personalities, which we learn a lot about, are both expressed and implied. How does she do all this in so few words?!
The story…
It’s surreal yet believable that a community would behave this way. How far are people willing to go to hold on to tradition? To pacify their superstitions? I wonder what it would be like to grow up there, how it would change you, if you’d be able to form healthy attachments, what your relationships would be like. I wonder if the lottery will continue. I wonder what would happen if they stopped. I wonder how long it would take for everyone to agree or if they ever would. I wonder…
Jackson gives readers a psychological slap. She makes us uncomfortable in a captivating way that’s not easily dismissed. The build-up, revelation, and subsequent reactions of characters leave readers with questions that intensify curiosity and creativity. I don’t care how silly this sounds—I’m going with it. Full force. (You have been warned.) This story changed my life.
It showed me what can be accomplished with a few, well-chosen words. It fed my desire to think, analyze, and contemplate. It appeased my fascination with human nature. It set my mind ablaze.
It is one of the stories that set me on my path. Short fiction can be done. And done well. It’s something I strive for when I sit down to write.
Author Bio
Sarah Brentyn is an introvert who believes anything can be made better with soy sauce and wasabi.
She loves words and has been writing stories since she was nine years old. She talks to trees and apologizes to inanimate objects when she bumps into them.
When she’s not writing, you can find her strolling through cemeteries or searching for fairies.
She hopes to build a vacation home in Narnia someday. In the meantime, she lives with her family and a rainbow-colored, wooden cat who is secretly a Guardian.
She is the author of two collections of flash fiction: Hinting at Shadows and her latest release On the Edge of a Raindrop.
Blurb (On the Edge of a Raindrop)
These are stories of lives on the edge.
A girl tortured by the world within her. A boy powerless to escape his home. A mother doomed to live with her greatest mistake. A man lost in a maze of grief.
Each raindrop provides a microscopic mirror of ourselves and those around us. But we can’t always trust what we see. The distorted images disorient the mind, altering our view of reality.
This second collection of flash and micro fiction explores the depths of the human condition and the fragile surface of our perceptions.
Dive into these tales of darkness and discover what life is like On the Edge of a Raindrop.
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I read “The Lottery” in junior high and it stuck with me to this day. I even recommended it for additional reading when I taught college writing courses. Excellent choice!
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That’s awesome. I would recommend this to anyone and certainly use it in classes. I never had the chance (with either age group or curriculum) to actually teach it but it would have been amazing. There is so much opportunity for discussion. Thanks, Staci!
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I’m embarrassed to admit I’ve never read it, but judging by the comments here and Sarah’s glowing recommendation, I need to rectify that.
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Go. Read. Now. 🙂 (I tried to avoid spoilers…)
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Definitely, Teri!
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Adding to the TBR!
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I saw a short film of The Lottery in junior high and was blown away by the message. Weirdly enough, I was just thinking about it a week or so ago. It’s a story that has been lodged in my memory from those long ago years. For me, it ranks up there with the Monsters Are Due on Maple Street by Rod Serling. Great choice.
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No way… After all these years, I never knew there was a film adaptation! Will check that out. Thanks. It does stay lodged in your mind. It’s been a long time for me. 😉 Ah, yes, Rod Serling. Good times.
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I’ve never seen the film either – and never read the story by Rod Serling. I’m really out of the loop!
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It was a script for an old episode of the Twilight Zone. One of my two favorites 🙂
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It’s certainly a story and theme that stays with you. One of my favorites.
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It’s a fantastic piece. Glad to see another fan. Have a great weekend!
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Thanks so much for having me over to your lovely reading corner, Teri. 🙂 It was perfect timing for me finishing a reread of an old favorite.
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Thrilled to have you visit, Sarah!
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Happy to be spending a little time over at Teri Polen’s ‘Writer’s Reading Corner’ today chatting about a favorite story that influenced my writing.
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I wonder if all writers have one of these books in their histories, one that woke them up or changed their lives or inspired so deeply the read hung on for decades. What a wonderful review, Sarah, as well as a peek into how the book led you down your writing path. Great post. Thanks to you and Teri!
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That’s what I’m hoping the writers will share with us, and Sarah’s is a perfect example. Thanks, Diana!
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Hey, Diana! 🙂 Nice to see you.
I think they do, don’t you? I mean, if they think on it a bit, I’ll bet most writers have some story or book or even a passage that has stayed with them and inspired them in some way. I have many. The Lottery is definitely one but other short stories and poetry that I haven’t read since grad school or earlier still make me smile or cringe just thinking about them. (You should read this one if you haven’t already.)
Thanks, Teri. I hope to see a lot of what inspired writers here at the reading corner.
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I’ll give it a go. 🙂
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Huh… I remember that story from middle school,some 40 years ago. I don’t recall all the details and now want to reread it. But I remember it, and others from that time of reading. What an intriguing idea, the one story that made a big difference; the “few well chosen words that set one on the path”… Hmmm…
Thanks.
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Looks like I’m the only one here who hasn’t read it – thanks for stopping by!
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It’s one of those stories. You may not remember details but you do remember it. It’s not easy to forget. Hope you get a chance to reread it. Thanks, D. 🙂
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Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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Intriguing review Sarah. Now I’m adding to my must reads. 🙂
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Ack! Debby…I missed your comment. Nice to see you.
Thanks for stopping by Teri’s place. Yes, The Lottery is a must-read for sure. And a short one so you can hopefully fit it in this year sometime. 😉
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I read and reviewed it already. 🙂 And no worries, eventually I get found, lol. 🙂
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I feel like The Lottery is one of those stories I feel obligated to read, as much as people talk about it. That’s probably exactly why I haven’t yet read it, lol.
Good review!
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At least I’m not alone!
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Haha! I know exactly what you mean. If everyone is saying, “You HAVE to read / watch / try this…” I’m not likely to run out and do it. But, if you do get a chance, you *could* try this one. Sometime. If you feel like it. Maybe. 😉 Thanks, Lilyn.
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if Sarah says it’s goo, then it must be; I’d better get on it now…
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Ah, Geoff. I really think you’ll like this. It makes you think about so many different things. (Sorry…I’m trying to write everything on here without spoilers.)
It was published in the 40s and, I believe, gained Jackson some hate mail and the publication some unsubscribers. So, you know, it’s got to be good. 😉
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I have it to read!
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Lovely to know more about Sarah. This is a cool feature, Teri. Hugs all around.
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Thanks, Teagan!
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Thank you, Teagan. I look forward to more writers chatting about a special story and why it’s special. Great feature, indeed. 🙂
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I have never heard of this book but it sounds fabulous. Thanks for sharing this Teri and Sarah.
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I’ve been hearing about this one for years, but unfortunately never got around to reading it.
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I hope you both get a chance to read it. (It really is fabulous, Robbie. I’m curious, if you do read it, what you think about it.) Have a great week!
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Sounds intriguing. I’ve never read it before, but it looks like there’s a PDF on it on Google that I’ll have to give a read!
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Ooh…definitely do check that out. Let me know what you think.
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I’m really enjoying reading ‘On The Edge of a Raindrop’ ; I savour one piece each time I switch on my Kindle.
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The snippets are perfect for that, aren’t they?
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I am so happy to read this! You made my week. 🙂 (And I love that you’re savoring each one.) Thank you!
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I just finished reading last night, so I shall write a review at the weekend. I’m seeing flash fiction in a differnt light now.
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Thank you!
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